If I could have the original in Word, I can happily proof read it for you - just read through it all, some spelling and grammar to clean up, but reading well.
Some suggestions:
- in the tips and tricks section, provide links / URLs to some of the better known tools out there
- maybe on the WOT logging section - reference IDCs - as my experience has proved, you can't always rely on the 'professionals' to have properly matched the tune to the fueling capacities (with potentially devastating consequences)
- also in that section, maybe reference the difference between CAN and SSM logging, and in particular the importance to log limited variables, and look out for 'lag' in the logs (i.e. variables not coinciding with other variables on the same line)
This is going to be a great manual!